Topic: I tried to write a poem which is a reflection to my routine of life (Read 383 times)

12-04-18 04:47 PM
Haxx
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di ako marunong magpost. hehe noobs kasi ako sa computer. nakita ko lang my attach kaya dun ko siguro ilalagay. haha. Pls try to read, gusto ko lang malaman kahit papano kung ok lang yung tula ko. Kung pangit man para sa inyo edi paki comment na rin para at least alam ko na its not making any sense.  :D

12-04-18 05:31 PM
jehejehe
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As Critic Reader :rofl:

di ko makuha yung saktong flow ng tula,
mga salitang ginamit ay tila manipula,
isiningit na tipong ermitanyong nagsasalita,
dala dala mga nakatagong ideya.

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12-05-18 08:05 AM
Haxx
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salamat sa comment. ok alng kahit nega at least i know na may nagbasa. hindi naman talaga ako writer kaya di na ako nabigla.. haha.

12-05-18 08:12 AM
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12-05-18 08:16 AM
Haxx
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diba ganun sina Rizal.. yung mga "Paalam na sintang lupang tinubuan" at Edeng maligaya sa akiy pumanaw.. bakit pag ako baduy.. haha batangenyo kase
« Last Edit: 12-05-18 08:20 AM by Haxx »

12-05-18 08:24 AM
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haha malawak lang talaga bokabularyo mo TS kaya nilamon ako nung binabasa ko hehe

wala kasi atang contest sa mga ibang forums about poem aside from mobi para macritic nang maigi hehe

12-05-18 10:37 AM
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12-05-18 10:58 AM
Haxx
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move on na naman ako brad. sinulat ko yan mga two years na nakakaraan, but now I already have my wife and a 3 month old beautiful daugther kaya ok na ako.  :-[ :-[
« Last Edit: 12-05-18 10:59 AM by Haxx »

12-06-18 01:37 AM
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