Topic: [POEM] Tula para sa mga pa-Hi Hi lang sa crush. (Read 15647 times)

07-02-13 08:49 AM
yerffej19
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Second Release ng sarili kong gawang mga tula para sa iyong iniibig:

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Just Don't Ignore my 'Hi'

I've been staring at your eye,
It's like a star at night sky,
From afar I want to say "Hi?"
I fell in love I don't know why.


For you, I will touch the sky,
For you, I will make the trees high,
For you, I will make statues cry,
For you, Just don't ignore my "Hi!"


I'll paint you like Mona Lisa,
I'll buy you "Tower of Pisa" ,
I'll take you to Eiffel Tower,
And create a rainbow shower


I'll buy an airplane just for you,
From up high we are only two,
We will jump and I'll look at you,
In mid-air I'll say "I LOVE YOU!"

Kaya yung sa mga totorpe torpe at pa-Hi Hi lang.
Lapitan mo na at bigyan mo ng gantong tula.

Comment lang sa gustong humiram
Sana maappreciate nyo.


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07-02-13 11:05 AM
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wow ayos 'to :rofl: wala pala talagang impossible :rofl:

07-05-13 05:06 PM
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how galeng :saludo: pa hiram ts, lagay ko sa notes ko sa hepbi para ma basa nya :news:

07-05-13 06:27 PM
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peram din ako ts. Pwede na gawing kanta kulang nalang ng tono at rhyme.

08-14-13 12:31 PM
yerffej19
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wow ayos 'to :rofl: wala pala talagang impossible :rofl:

Sinabi mo pa basta pagibig XD


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how galeng :saludo: pa hiram ts, lagay ko sa notes ko sa hepbi para ma basa nya :news:

Thank you. Sana mabasa nya :)

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peram din ako ts. Pwede na gawing kanta kulang nalang ng tono at rhyme.

Onga> Ginawa rin naming kanta yan actually
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08-14-13 03:16 PM
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Ganda naman nito ts :) sana mainlove crush dito hahaha

08-16-13 08:30 PM
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ang ganda. . Bagay saken dahil "TORPE" ako, pahiram ts :)

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08-18-13 09:33 PM
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08-19-13 10:29 PM
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10-09-13 12:14 AM
bigboy126
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pahiram po, ang ganda po ng tula nio

10-12-13 02:41 PM
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10-13-13 08:55 PM
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10-15-13 07:49 PM
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10-16-13 09:19 AM
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ipiprint ko to tapos ilalagay ng palihim sa bag niya. :rofl:
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10-16-13 04:24 PM
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10-28-13 10:35 PM
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pa c0py gagawin k0ng kanta.pwdi
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10-29-13 11:53 AM
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11-06-13 07:19 PM
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pwede kaya to sa may mataas na IQ katulad ko? :dejavu:

11-13-13 09:20 PM
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ts gawin kong kanta ha tapos malay mo diyan ako sumikat hahaha tapos kaw writer ko

02-02-14 10:31 AM
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Salamat po sa lahat ng pumuri at nagandahan sa tulang ito, ppilitin ko pa pong maglabas ng marami, ok na sakin ang like at konting share kahit saang social media just put proper credits lang mga sir. Very much appreciated. Up ko lang sa mga hindi pa nkakabasa kasi matagal na itong hindi na nababasa uli ng iba.


Sa mga nagtatanong ng tono ppilitin kong alamin yung inilapat namin na tono, hahah sobrang tagal na kasi neto. :)
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